I read your excerpt. Very well written, aside from a few minor grammatical errors. More importantly, it engages interest, even though it's short. Captive-romance novels aren't usually my cup of tea, but I already feel invested in the fate of the characters, and am interested in reading the rest. I don't have a Wattpad account, but would you mind letting me know when you update?
Fabulous! I will have to read the story.
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Very nice images, and you are certainly a most appealing form.
Really beautiful photo!
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